d shouted: “we are the winner! we are the winner!” at the very moment, “bang! bang! bang!” we heard the noises of knocking at the door and a teacher shouted:“ don’t be so excited. go to sleep now.” so we dared not make any noise. we even smiled in our dreams that night.

　　教师评语：

　　    your dormitory life sounds very exciting and enjoyable. when china was accepted to the world cup i was watching it and very excited too. i am not surprised you were so happy. well written!
 

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