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2004-2009高考英语满分作文及名师评析
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  2. 参考词汇:配件—— spare part;

  3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数);

  4.已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。

  dear sir,

  i am writing to you for the mobile phone of dephone-s250 i bought on 20th apr.2008 at tele mall in wuhan, p.r. china. ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages. then i took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and i had to wait at least three months for a new one. i had no choice but to go to the repairman. to my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in china, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. i was so desperate on hearing that for i can not wait that long. therefore, i have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.

  thank you for your consideration.

  sincerely yours,

  bu manyi

  【名师点评】

  本文内容要点齐全,语言丰富,结构合理,如头两句说明了购买手机后发现故障的情况,中间部分

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