情况,并描写你随后与邻居交涉的过程(如:你向邻居提出要求,对方向你表示歉意等。)
注意:1. 词数:80—120
2. 可以编写对话或其它叙述方式描写你与邻居的交涉过程
about 9 o'clock last night, i was doing my homework. suddenly i heard my neighbor shouting and laughing loudly. he was watching a football game on tv. i couldn't go on studying and became impatient. i covered my ears, trying to keep the noises out, but failed. so i had to go my neighbor.
i knocked at his door and said," good evening, mr. yang! could you please turn down your tv a bit? i am doing my homework.'
“oh, i'm really sorry to have disturbed you. we'll do as you say.” my neighbor said politely.
“thank you very much..” i said and went back to continue my study.
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【英语各档次的给分范围和要求】
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