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2004年高考英语满分作文及名师评析
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情况,并描写你随后与邻居交涉的过程(如:你向邻居提出要求,对方向你表示歉意等。)

  注意:1. 词数:80—120

  2. 可以编写对话或其它叙述方式描写你与邻居的交涉过程

  about 9 o'clock last night, i was doing my homework. suddenly i heard my neighbor shouting and laughing loudly. he was watching a football game on tv. i couldn't go on studying and became impatient. i covered my ears, trying to keep the noises out, but failed. so i had to go my neighbor.

  i knocked at his door and said," good evening, mr. yang! could you please turn down your tv a bit? i am doing my homework.'

  “oh, i'm really sorry to have disturbed you. we'll do as you say.” my neighbor said politely.

  “thank you very much..” i said and went back to continue my study.

  [名师点评]

  这篇文章从整体上来看,内容完整,要点齐全。在准确领悟题意的基础上,用平实的语言,将文章娓娓道来,连贯而流畅。句式搭配长短结合。文章对对话的描写,很生动,让人有种身临其境的感觉。

  【英语各档次的给分范围和要求】

  第五档(很好);(2

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