;ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a tv. you’ll also have your own bathroom. our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. at noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. i’m sure you’ll like the delicious chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. you can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. it’ll be a lot of fun.
if you have any questions or requests, please let me know. we’ll try our best to make your stay here in beijing a pleasant experience.
best wishes,
li hua
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