quirement on line. you would like to search for a chinese friend to help you get to know china and its culture. maybe i’m your good choice.

　　china is a country that has a long history of 5,000 years. not only our history ,but also our culture is the access to understand us better.

　　there are so much that i want to know, if you are interested. i’ll be looking forward to your reply. i’ll show you around our great china if you come to china.

　　yours sincerely ,

　　li hua

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