d by the ministry of education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on april 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over china. almost 11 million students in jiangsu province participated in this program.

　　the ministry of education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. our whole life will be very enjoyable.

　　in my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. health is a basic condition for our study. if we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. so every one of you, join the program now!

　　thank you!

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　　本文的结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段，前两段叙述，后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。

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