how are you these days?
i’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn chinese. you asked me to find a place for you. now i’ve found one which i think is pretty good. the place is on fang cao street which is near the no.11 bus stop. it’s just one stop away from jianxin chinese school.
there are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, i think it is suitable. by the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. i hope you’ll like it. if not, i’ll try to find another place for you.
yours,
li hua
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本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。
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dear bob,
i’m glad to hear from you.
welcome to our city in september. i’ve found a suitable house for you.
the house is on fang cao street, not far from the jianxin chinese school. if you take the no.11 bus, it is jus