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　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　li hua

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dear bob,
　　welcome to china! you wrote to me to find a place for you.
　　i have found an apartment on fangcao street near jianxin chinese school. it is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. the house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
　　also from this house you can get to your school easily. just take the no.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. it is only one stop. at last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? then i’u be able to meet you at the airport, 　　see you.
　　best wishes !
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 yours,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 li hua

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