a letter to my pen pal

dear lei yun:

hello! i am tian jin hua. i live in wei yang hu garden. i am very happy to have a new pen pal like you.

i am a boy. i like listening to music very much . i have a happy family. my dad is an engineer. he likes working with numbers. my mum has no job. she is a kind mother. she does housework every day to keep our home clean.

i have a little brother. he is a lovely boy! you must like him at your first sight.

what about you? is everything ok? can you tell me ?