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　　写作要求：

　　1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

　　2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。

　　3.词数60-80.

　　[学生习作a]

　　my hobby is read books①.when i was seven years old.i became interested in reading books.i like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.i can learn a lot of knowledge from books. books also② can teach me how to be a good person.books even can solve many problems for me.i will read more good books to improve myself.

　　①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。

　　②also的位置应放在can之后。

　　[点评]：档次9-11分。

　　①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。

　　②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。

　　③有少量错误。

　　[学生习作b]

　　my hobby is reading.reading books is very enjoyable.when i was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.i went to bed every night.the stories were so interesting that i always felt they weren’t enough.so i began to read books by m

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