8. 你还要别的什么吗？
误：else what would you like？
正：what else would you like？
析：else修饰疑问词或不定代词时，应放在它们的后面，又如：do you want anything else？
9. 请你不要打开窗户，好吗？
误：would you not please open the window？
正：would you please not open the window？
析：“would you please ……”用于委婉地提出建议、请求等。其否定形式应为：“would you please not ……”
10. 昨天所有的学生都去了公园。
误：the all students went to the park yesterday.正：all the students went to the park yesterday.析：当all， both等作定语修饰名词，且名词又有the修饰时，all， both等通常放在之前。
11. 她捡起了笔，把它还给了我。
误：she picked up the pen and gave back it to me.正：she picked up the pen and gave it back to me.析：由及物动词加副词构成的短语，当宾语是代词时，代词一般放在副词之前。
12. 你知道他什么时候回来吗？
误：do you know when will he come back？
正：do you know when he will come back？
析：在含有宾语从句的复合句中，宾语从句连接词之后应该用陈述语序。