界。

　　析：around 是副词，这里误当动词用。

　　正：few people can travel around the world.

　　例2：the place is danger. 这个地方危险。

　　析：danger 是名词，这里误用为形容词。

　　正：the place is dangerous. 或 the place is in danger.

　　十一、指代不清

　　指代不清主要指代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不一致。

　　例1：mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid. 玛丽和我姐姐很要好，因为她要她做她的伴娘。

　　析：此句让读者无法判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚，谁将当伴娘。

　　正：mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.

　　例2：help yourself to some drink， boys and girls. 孩子们，随便喝些饮料吧。

　　析：句中的 boys and girls 和反身代词 yourself指代不一致。正：help yourselves to some drink， boys and girls.

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