es of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. we feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

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　　本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。

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　　in your spoken english class, your teacher shows you the following picture. you are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

　　what an interesting picture! a western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. he is holding two forks the same way as we chinese hold chopsticks. he is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. at first glance, i think it’s a bit funny, for we chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. the man in the picture is trying to copy us. obviously he is doing it the hard way. maybe using on

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