came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.

　　the next day, we set off early in the morning. while climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view . however, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. then we started to pick up the litter and put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.

　　we were tired but happy.

　　【名师点评】

　　本情景作文的内容要点如下：1.讨论;2.爬山;3.检拾别人的垃圾;4.投放垃圾。内容要点可用不同方式表达。本文覆盖了所有内容要点，较好地完成了试题规定的任务。其中，写作主题突出，详略得当，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，而且有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文机构紧凑。本文叙述清楚，描写细致，准确运用了很多富有表现力的词和句型，例如：“set off early”，“enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view”, ”were shocked to see litter here and there “等，将活动的情形很形象地描述了出来。

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