16.it wasn't until yesterday that i got it,as i had been out on business for a week.
in your letter,you told me that you preferred your job to the city of shanghai.in my opinion,shanghai is an exciting and a beautiful place.try to enjoy yourself in your spare time besides your devotion to work.
i'm sorry to say that i won't go to shanghai because our school will hold an open-air party.i have to stay for the performances on the holiday.by the way,would you please come and join us in the party hangzhou is so beautiful in autumn that i'm sure you will like it.
yours
zhang hong(127)
【解题导引】写回信与首次给人写信不同,它必须以别人给你的来信为基础,展开你的写作思路,决不能置他人的来信于不顾.因此,第一步首先要细读来信并读懂信的内容,包括一些细节及信的言外之意.其次要对来信所提出的问题作出相应的反应,表明自己的态度和看法,并解释其原因.最后,写回信者也可以介绍自己方面的新闻或向来信人提出建议或要求等,这样"一来一往"则发挥了书信的功能,达到了相互交流之目的.
另外,在写信中,务必注意书信的格式.由于近几年高考所要求写信的题目均已给出了相应的头,尾,弱化了学生在书信这一书面表达能力的培养.故广大师生有必要加强书信中的日期,称呼,结束语,签名等方面的训练,同时还要特别注意正文部分的头尾常用客套话的运用.