隔离,种族歧视的黑暗现象.短文需通过一些事例来揭示这一主题:

　　1)黑人不公平的遭遇:

　　①we're not treated as equal citizens.

　　②we can't go to the public parks or swimming pools.

　　2)黑人反抗行为:

　　①we want the same rights as the white people in birmingham.

　　②we demand better housing and jobs.

　　③we join in the march and march peacefully.

　　3)美国当局镇压黑人的行径:

　　①the police come up and tell us to go home.

　　②they want to forbid the march.

　　③they hit us with their sticks over and over again.

　　④they put some of us in prison.

　　在改写成短文过程中,除了在内容要点上要覆盖上述几点,还必须注意几个问题:

　　1)人称改用第三人称;

　　2)时态应用过去时;

　　3)连接自然,行文流畅.

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