li hua

　　满分理由：本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。

范文四：

 dear bob,

　　i’m so glad that you are coming to learn chinese here. i’ve already found you a house near our school. i’d like to tell you something about it.

　　you may get on no.ll bus at fang cao street and the next stop is just jian xin chinese school. the house is near the school. it is about 25 square metres. in the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window. you may find a light on the table and a chair next to it. there are two other rooms connecting the bedroom. the left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen. so you may cook by yourself. the rent for the house is 500 yuan per month.

　　hope you’ll enjoy staying here!

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 yours,

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 li hua

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