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范文五：

 dear bob,

　　i’m glad to hear from you.

　　welcome to our city in september. i’ve found a suitable house for you.

　　the house is on fang cao street, not far from the jianxin chinese school. if you take the no.11 bus, it is just one stop.

　　it is a flat on the third floor of a building. it has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. you can cook yourself. the mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. in the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. the desk is next to the window. it will be good for study. the total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.

　　will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? just let me know. i’ll try my best to help you.

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