“they are wasting resources, for example, time, energy and money.”
上面这句话不错,只是转折词“for example”不妥当;应该这样:
“they are wasting resources. for example, they use too much time, energy and money.”
不然就要换一换转折词,改用“such as”或“like”:
“they are wasting resources, such as (or like) time, energy and money.”
不管任何语言,转折词(transitional words)都扮演着一个重要角色,就是:承先启后,使句子紧凑,段落相吸,对文章结构,有良性作用。但是有些人几乎没有采用转折词的习惯,结果文句松散,上下文七零八乱,应该避免。
现在把主要转折词,分类列下,供大家参考。
ⅰ表示“尤有进者”的意思:
again, also, then, besides, further, furthermore, moreover, next, in addition等,如:
① jason teaches diligently. besides, he writes a lot.
② english is a useful language. for one thing, it is an official language in the un. then, it is widely used in business, science and technology.
ⅱ表示“反意见”: