sunday may 21，2003 sunny
going on a picnic
today was sunday. the weather was fine and warm. the sky was very clear and blue. my classmates and i were very happy， because we went out for a picnic at nanshan hill. we went to nanshan hill by bike with fruits， eggs， meat， vegetables， knives and some other things.
about one and a half hours later， we came to a nice place at the foot of the hill. there were many beautiful flowers and green trees. birds sang their sweet songs. how pleased we were！ then we were busy with the picnic. some of us were getting water， some were cutting the meat and vegetables and cook， others were sitting on the grass and waiting for nice lunch. at about 13 o'clock， our lunch was ready. we all sat around on the green grass， singing， talking， eating and drinking. at about 16：00 we began packing for our return.
what a nice time we were having！
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