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what is beauty in your mind?
everyone admires beauty. everyone has his own standard about beauty.
nowadays some people tend to think that they own beauty if they have a good looking. they are not satisfied with their appearance. they spend much money taking a kind of operation. can beauty really be man-made?if so,everybody can get beauty. as a result,there is no beauty at all.the appearance is given by our parents and is unique in the world. everyone should value it. i would rather nature as the standard of beauty. just accept yourself,accept everything the god gives to you,and create the beautiful life belonging to you.
many heroes don't have beautiful surface. however,their beautiful images often come to our minds. their beauty comes from their contributions to the society.don't be eager to judge whether a person is beautiful or not without a thorough understanding of him. a beautiful person is not