h the offender.
(修正) what we had to do was to stand there, trying to catch the offender.
(3)分词短语、由with或without引导的短语
(原文) the driver escaped and didn’t stop, he left the old man lying on the road.
(修正) the driver escaped without stopping, leaving the old man lying on the road.
(4)倒装句
(原文) i went to bed at 11:30.
(修正) not until 11:30 did i go to bed.
(5)省略句
(原文) while you are crossing the street, you should be careful.
(修正) while crossing the street, you should be careful.
3. 通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。例如:
(原文) he stopped us an hour ago. he made us catch the next offender.
(修正) he stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.
(原文) we had a short rest. then we began to play happily. we sang and danced.
(修正) after a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing.
4. 注意连接词与句子的运用。
以2001年高考作文为例,在信的开头,可加上&ld