other was riding the bike with me sitting on the seat behind. (全国卷)
③ 通过合句，将意义相关的几个句子，用一定的连接方法连接起来，或通过紧缩，去掉一些多余的成分可以避免冗长累赘，松散无力，使句子凝练，层次清楚。
the flat is in a building on fangcao street. it is not far from jianxin chinese school.
修改后：the flat is in a building on fangcao street, which is not far from jianxin chinese school. (全国卷)
④ 尝试改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等，这样能增加文章的节奏和韵律美。
we met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.
修改后：early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. (全国卷)
五、思想性www.gaokaomanfenzuowen.cn
新标准对写作的要求，增加了情感因素，要求在准确流畅表达写作要点的同时，适当增加句子的感情色彩，增加一些人情味，使文章读起来更亲切，完全达到与读者进行交流的目的。如：
do you think you’ll like it? if not, i can try and find another flat for you. (全国卷) 表现了作者对朋友尽职尽责的心情，回信由此布满浓厚的感情色彩。
六、使作文“形神都不散” www.gaokaomanfenzuowen.cn
汉语作文要求“形散，神不散”，而英语作文则要