ng coins is also his hobby.
析：误句的问题就在于句子不平行(不一致)，因为and前后都为句子，按英语习惯其结构形式应该一致。
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代词一致的问题主要存在于性别一致、数的一致(单复数问题)和代词的格等方面。如：
误：there are forty students in our class, and thirty of them are boys.
正：there are forty students in our class, and thirty of us are boys.
析：从前一分句可看出，本句谈论的是“我们班”的情况，故后一分句也应用第一人称。
误：once one has money, we can do what he wants (to do)
正：once one has money, he can do what he wants (to do)
析：误句中前面提到的是one has money，面又有what he wants，we与前后代词不一致，故应改为he。
六、搭配不一致
搭配不一致主要指句中的固定搭配应保持完整并与上下文一致。如：
误：he worked so hard as he could catch up with his classmates.
正：he worked so hard that he could catch up with his classmates.
析：从固定形式上看，有so…as…,so …that… 等。但从句意上看，此处应该用so…that…，才能保持句意及结构的一致。
误：i was so tired that i fell asleep at the moment my head touched the