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相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中a句简单句多,而且多处使用there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而b句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

  5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

  a: it's a flat of 25 square metres. there is a bedroom in the flat. there is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. in the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

  b: it's a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. in the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

  三、布局谋篇――独具匠心

  在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,nmet2002范文堪称典范。请看:

  opinions are divided on the question.

  60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. they believe a public park should be free of charge. people need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. what is more, it will become n

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