died.
十、词性误用
“词性误用”常表现为:介词当动词用,形容词当副词用,名词当动词用等。
例1:few people can around the world. 很少人能周游世界。
析:around 是副词,这里误当动词用。
正:few people can travel around the world.
例2:the place is danger. 这个地方危险。
析:danger 是名词,这里误用为形容词。
正:the place is dangerous. 或 the place is in danger.
十一、指代不清
指代不清主要指代词与被指代的人或物关系不清,或者先后所用的代词不一致。
例1:mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid. 玛丽和我姐姐很要好,因为她要她做她的伴娘。
析:此句让读者无法判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚,谁将当伴娘。
正:mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
例2:help yourself to some drink, boys and girls. 孩子们,随便喝些饮料吧。
析:句中的 boys and girls 和反身代词 yourself指代不一致。正:help yourselves to some drink, boys and girls.
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