s, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. in the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.
三、布局谋篇——独具匠心
在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,nmet2002范文堪称典范。请看:
opinions are divided on the question.
60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. they believe a public park should be free of charge. people need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. what is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
on the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. they suggested, however, fees should be charged low.
1)该文使用opinions are divided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑