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is the internet dangerous to children
as far as i know，nowadays many schools don’t like their students to surf on the internet. even more parents think of the internet as a bad influence in their children’s lives，which is all because there are many examples of students who have given up their studies or even become bad as a result of having got into the habit of surfing on the internet.
from my point of view，the internet is not dangerous to children. generally speaking，the major reasons of my opinion can be listed as follows. to begin with，the internet plays a very important role in the modernization of our world. in a word，if we cannot use the internet，we cannot keep up with the pace of the e-time.
in the second place，the internet can help us a lot in our work and studies if properly used. last but not the least，the internet can entertain us with funny stories，games，literature and so on as