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my unforgettable trip
when i was a primary school student, my family and i took a trip to five cities which were in the south of china.
first, we came to nanjing by plane. that was the first time i had taken the plane and it took us an hour and a half to get there. we arrived in nanjing in the morning. at 11:30 we went to a restaurant to have lunch. the food tasted delicious. in the afternoon we went to “zhongshanling”. it was the place that preserve the tomb of mr. sugshan.
the next day, we came to wuxi and then suzhou where we visited the region of rivers and lakes of “周庄”. it was a beautiful and old place. the house there were along the river and the women always washed clothes at the bank.the fourth day, we came to hangzhou where we visited “the west lake. it was very beautiful and the water was clear . as we all know, hangzhou is famous for silk and tea, so w