写好记叙文的基本要领
1. 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ w ”和一个“ h ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ w ”和“ h ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ w ”和“ h ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2. 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
one night a man came to our house and told me, "there is a family with eight children. they have not eaten for days." i took some food with me and went.
when i finally came to that family, i saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger. there was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger.
i gave the rice to the mother. she divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the r
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