引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整： 

　　i was in the kitchen cooking something. "crash!" a loud noise came from the front. thinking someone was knocking at the door, i asked, "who?" no reply. after a while, i saw my cat running across the parlor. "it's you." i said, quite released.  
 

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