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雅思写作概述与评分标准
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ace in the 21st century and trying to protect these animals is a waste of resources. do you agree or disagree? 有同学这样写道:we can hardly imagine what our life will be like without wild animals. for example, if there is no cat, there will be more mice. the increase in the number of mice will result in the reduction of food resources and the spread of diseases. thus, it is very important to protect animals. 这里,猫的论据是不合适的,因为猫不属于wild animals(野生动物)。再比如,the university should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give students more practical training. do you agree or disagree? 有同学在论证这道题的时候举了赵括“纸上谈兵”的例子,说赵括就是典型的有很多兵法等理论知识,但是由于缺乏带兵打仗的实际经验,导致秦赵长平之战中赵兵大败,自己也命丧沙场,这充分说明了只有理论知识没有实际经验的恶果,所以应该重视实际经验。但这个论据也是不得体的,因为题目涉及的是大学应该怎么做,而赵括明显没有上过大学。事实上,古代的例子通常不适宜在雅思作文中出现,即便出现了,许多情况下只是作为反面例子与现今状况形成对比。

  好的arguments(论证)应该是充分并且有力的。这就需要运用多种论证手法。常用的论证手法有:explanation(解释说明),emphasis(强调论证),exemplification(举例说明),cause and effect(因果论证),comparison and contrast(比较与对比)facts and statistics(事实和统计数据),concession and

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