多少年来，大家一直都是在当学生写作文，今天就换一个角色，当一回老师判作文，这可绝非仅仅寻求感觉的刺激！最重要的是，我们要用上面讲的高分作文的评判标准和差作文的劣迹表现，分别对一篇漫画考题的高、低分实考样卷进行评判打分，然后“对症下药”、“量体裁衣”，才有出奇的效果啊！
as every thread of gold is valuable, so every moment of time.
一寸光阴一寸金。
作文实例：
directions:
study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should
终点又是新起点
1) describe the drawing,
2) interpret its meaning, and
3) support your view with example.
you should write about 200 words neatly on answer sheet 2. (20 points)
高分作文：
the cartoon depicts a vivid picture in which an athlete, dripping sweat, is rushing to the end. obviously, he wins the match, but this is not the key message conveyed by the picture. the most striking feature of the drawing is that the same line is marked as both “the start” and “the end”, which indicates that although the athlete came to the finish, a new race is waiting