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如何在写作中进行“简洁”的表达
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isfather neededhelponthefarm.

  从意思上来分析,上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是“grandfather'snotbeing 
able tos tudy”,而在表达这个概念时,原句用的主语是situation,谓语动词是was,
不能强调需要表达的重点概念,可以改为

  下面这句话:mygrandfathercouldn'tstudyengineeringbecausehisfatherneeded
helponthefarm.

  2.避免频繁使用“therebe”结构,例如下面的句子:

  therewere25cowsonthefarmthatmygrandfatherhadtomilkeveryday.itwashardwork
formygr and father.

  可以改为:mygrandfatherworkedhard.hehadtomilk25cowsonthefarmeveryday.

  更简洁的句式为:mygrandfatherworkedhardmilking25cowsdaily.

  3.把从句改为短语或单词。例如:

  dairycowswereraisedonthefarm,whichwaslocated100kilometersfromthenearestuniversityandwasinanareathat wasre
mote.

  简介的表达方式为:the dairy farm was located inaremote area,100kilometers

to the nearest university.

  4.仅在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候,才使用被动语态。例如:

  inthefall,notonlydidthecowshavetobemilked,butalsothehaywasmowedandstackedbymygrandfather'sfamily.

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