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he lived. the two students decided to take him home. mother was pleased to see xiaoqiang come back safe and sound. she invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it. she served them with tea but they left.

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  the other day, five-year-old xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street. after some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home. but he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic. when he could not find the way home, he started and crying. just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop. they immediately went up to him.

  "little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked.

  "i want mom, i go home." said the boy, still crying.

  "don't worry, we'll send you home."

  and they spent the next two hours looking for the boy

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