高中英语议论文的写作方法与技巧
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he people,the society and so on were quite different from now.
析:the people,the society依然不足以让读者完全理解要论述的话题,可改为:the peopie,the society and other aspects of life were quite different from now.
5.thieves should be sentenced for what they have done.
析:使用sentence未免言过其实,应改为:thieves should be punished for their wrongdoing.
(三)简洁洗练,要言不烦
语言简洁有力,文风干净利落,是议论文的重要特征之一。应该指出的是,好句子并不以长短论英雄,长句未必不简洁,短句未必不哆咳。作者在写作时,只要力求做到“章无冗段,段无冗句,句无冗词”,就可改变当断不断、拖泥带水的现象。
1.the are no good reasons why boys and girls should not be treated equally.
析:此为一标题句,此作者滥用双重否定,从而使句子过长。
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