高中英语议论文的写作方法与技巧
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d comfortable.
析:句子后半部分的逻辑关系未交代清楚,令人有“前言不搭后语“的感觉。可以改为:theere are surely disadvantages of living in a city,too,but they are less important and tend to be de-emphasized.for the sake of the advantages mentioned above,i prefer to live in a city.
3.different people have different choices.some people like living in a city and some people like living in a village.
析:choice的含义十分宽泛,因此与后面的like不相称,应改为:different people have different likes and dislikes.some like to live in a city,others like to live in a village.
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