高中英语议论文的写作方法与技巧
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宜改为:boys and girls should be given equal treatment.
2.for instance,i knew how to communicate with other people and how to look after myself.the most important thing was that i learn to be independent.
析:从意义上讲,look after myself与independent关系紧密,可以合在一起。句子可改为:for instance,i knew how to communicate with others and how to look after myself as an independent girl.
3.moreover,as some girls study harder than boys,they may be even superior.
析:moreover后若继续用从句,就会干扰读者的思维。可改为:moreover,some girls are very dilgent.as a result,they m
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