iety. so i think, personally, it?s like the sportman of the picture that only continue to run and effort toward the place of end point, that is necessary to young people in the society.

　　in summary, my final conclusion is only to continue running toward end place and the place is also a new stating for another aim, only so. it?s a spirit of all young people. although the road is very hardship. but this is very important to us. (216 words)

　　这篇文章得分6分，远远低于及格分12分，可能作者还有点“委屈”，“我的字数也符合要求，也是三段，也有举例，也有分析，为什么这么不公平呢？”其实，文章虽然基本包括了题目所要求的内容，但条理不清，语言错误很多，其中很多是严重的错误，如文中用黑体标记出的地方。

　　怎么样？通过对漫画考题的高、低分实考样卷进行研读，你是不是对自己的作文档次有了一个初步的估计？对自己今后在写作方面的发展方向有了一个清楚的认识？能做到这一点，你今天的学习就达标了。

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