for him.
the idea conveyed by the cartoon is apparent: the end is a new start. it is widely accepted that we should not be satisfied with the present achievement, for nowadays new challenges and competition never stop. the market economy and competitive society drives many people studying hard for higher academic degrees, some of them even seeking the opportunities to study abroad. we should spare no efforts improving ourselves, master high technology and professional skills. then we can make use of it to devote ourselves to society.
take my father as an example. he was denied higher education for historical reasons. but by self?study he became a technician in a factory. many people thought he was content. but he never stopped studying. he took courses of law in his spare time. later he became a lawyer. “the finishing point is just a new starting point”, he said to me. （219 words）
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