knowledge and having interesting time in my school. i have also made friendship with lots of classmates, and i have also been taught different lessons by lots of different patient teachers. i have grown up a lot in the past six years. i will never forget my six years' school life.
教师评析:整篇作文非常明快、流畅,体现了考生对母校依依不舍的情怀。由于是对学校生活的回顾和总结,考生恰当地选择以现在完成时作为主要的时态来强调影响和结果,文中"plays an important role"这一词组和被动语态的正确运用也体现了考生良好的词汇和语法功底。
教师拟评分:10分
二、应用文写作
应用文主要包括信函、电邮、日记、通知、广告、电话等形式,它要求考生不仅能表达题中的主要内容,还能够正确地运用各种文本格式进行规范的书写,这也是考生对于英语传统文化了解多少的反映。因此,考生应在临考前系统地复习各种文本格式以及打电话的规范用语,以做到处变不惊、百战百胜。
[例3]写一封信给你在云南省西双版纳市的笔友李帆,告诉他你很愿意与他交朋友,并邀请他到上海来旅行。
审题:该题要求考生以规范的信件格式来书写,并把题中所出现的信息点都涵概在内。建议考生可把题目中的信息点都一一划出,以免发生遗漏。
学生作文:
lifan
xishuangbanna
yunnan province china
may25th,2004
dear lifan,
thank you for your letter. i'm glad to be your pen-friend. we are the sam
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