e years old, but we were born in different places. in my imagination, xishuangbanna is a very beautiful place. there are a lot of plants and animals. you know i look forward to visiting xishuangbanna. would you like to come to shanghai? i'd like to invite you to shanghai in summer holiday. shanghai is also a beautiful place. it is a modern city. there are a lot of interesting places such as the oriental pearl tv tower, the bund, and nanjing road walkway.
　　if you come here, i will show you around shanghai. you can live at my home and my mother will cook you much delicious food. let's be best friends!

yours sincerely,

xiaomin
　　
　　教师拟评分：9分

　　［例4］写一篇题为“a visit to_____”的日记。

　　审题：该题为半命题式作文。考生除了要注意运用正确的日记格式，还可根据自己的经验和熟悉程度来选择、确定文章的主题.

　　学生作文：

may 25th, 2004 　　    sunny　

a visit to jinmao building

　　jinmao buil

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